Five 50-Word Stories
ONE:
Mr Blonde picks up the phone. “Good Afternoon Mr Blonde, we need to talk” Mr Blonde replied “Who is this?” and felt a sharp sting on his left foot. A bullet had went through. Mr Blonde fell to the floor and was greeted by the same voice. “The name’s Bill.”
TWO:
The bunny rabbit crept along the corridor and opened the bedroom door. On the bed lay Mrs. Jackson, fast asleep. The bunny climbed up to her side and fished out a sushi knife. Mrs Jackson suddenly woke up throwing the bunny to the wall and the knife into the air.
THREE:
Danial panickly put on his helmet and put the key in the ignition. He could hear the screams behind him. He stepped on the kickstart but the bike did’nt start. As the screams get louder, he gave a final kick and the bike went to life. He then zoomed off.
FOUR:
Neg sits on the park bench and scans for his next victim. He sees a fat guy and waits for him to walk past. He then sneaks up to him and jumps on his back like a human rodeo. The fatty screams. Neg then jumps off and checks his stopwatch.
FIVE:
Nigel pinches the pick and aligns it to the sixth string. He then looks up to the audience, smiles, and put his mouth near the microphone. He started singing that familiar tune he always hums to Avril. His eye then caught Avril in the audience who smiled back at him.
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theredpants | May 28, 2009 at 12:48 PM
Most of your stories here are either extended openers or just aren’t very compelling. For a good story, it must have conflict and full characters with a beginning, middle and an end. And of course, it must be easily understandable, which some of your tales are not.